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Lisa's avatar

Gosh, my heart twisted reading this and relating to all you shared. This line will stay with me - "I need to care for everything we’ve lost, and he needs to care for everything we have".

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Erin Mount's avatar

Oh my goodness, Allie! This is breathtaking. Every word is so well-chosen. Congratulations on winning!

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you so much, Erin! So kind of you.♥️

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Laura Rennie's avatar

😭❤️ what a beautifully told story! Your visuals are fantastic—the Jenga tower, the Hot Wheels, the puzzle, and of course, the beds.

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you Laura! I really appreciate that. 😊♥️

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Ashlee Gadd's avatar

Beautiful, Allie ❤️ Thank you for writing this.

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you, Ashlee♥️♥️

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Kristen's avatar

Wow! Wow wow wow. Thank you for your art.

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Stacy Bronec's avatar

Beautiful, Allie. 💛💛

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you, Stacy♥️♥️

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Meredith's avatar

Oh my heart. Thank you for this.

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Coffee + Crumbs's avatar

This one touched our hearts as well. Thanks for reading.

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Anna Shane Stadick's avatar

This was so well written. Loved.

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Julie's avatar

Love this. We’ve been going through this with our baby with medical needs. It’s good to relate. Bless you.

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Donna Beriont's avatar

You captured a loving, intimate marriage here. The longing touched my soul.

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Becky Morquecho's avatar

Such beautiful writing, friend! And that last line 👏🏽 Loved this piece so, so much.

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Allie King's avatar

Thanks for being the best cheerleader around, sweet friend. 🥰

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Sophie's avatar

Wow wow wow. Well done, Allie. So well written and so relatable 😭❤️

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you so much, Sophie! ♥️

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Samantha Murphy's avatar

Oof what a tender read. Thank you for your beautiful words.

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you for reading, Samantha!

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Angela's avatar

Oh my gosh this essay! I listened to it on audio while outside on my morning walk with the baby. You wove so many beautiful analogies together…and the references to scanning for germs and carrying hand sanitizer I could relate to with my daughter going through cancer treatment. My favorite analogy was you referring to you and your husband as puzzle 🧩 pieces…that line got me.

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Coffee + Crumbs's avatar

Do you enjoy listening to it? We are so glad! We are trying to do more of those audio files where the writer reads her work.

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Laura Bass's avatar

This is beautiful, Allie!

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you, Laura!

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Kendra Kruckenberg's avatar

Allie, I relate to just about every single thing in here!! This essay is BEAUTIFUL. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

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Allie King's avatar

Thank you for this encouragement, Kendra! I’m so glad it resonated. Thank you for reading♥️

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